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September 25, 2007

John Steinbeck

Filed under: Uncategorized — one21 @ 2:18 pm

1. What does John Steinbeck say is needed to write a great short story?

John Steinbeck said that to write a great short story, is to write a good short story. Then you take it apart and look at it. Another thing is to know your subject inside out. Personally, that first part makes no sense to me. That’s just like saying “to throw a fast pitch, you throw a fast pitch”. It’s simple and confusing, but I’m not sure it’s exactly my place to say.

2. Tell us about a short story you remember reading. What stands out about the story?

I remember a short story by Edgar Allen Poe, the title of which escapes me. I read this short story last year in school. It was about a man going crazy and killing his neighbor because he was making the man paranoid. What stood out the most was the fact that the man killed his neighbor because apparently the old man had a “hawk’s eye” and it simply freaked him out.

September 23, 2007

The Mafia’s Box

Filed under: Uncategorized — one21 @ 8:17 am

A man stumbled into the building from the poring rain. He was absolutely drenched, but at the same time, relieved. He gripped the handle tighter. He closed the door behind him and proceeded down the dark hallway.

At the end of the hallway was a door. The man reached for the door, when a voice boomed, “Enter.”

How does he do that? the man thought with a shudder of slight fear. He opened the door and stepped into the room. He closed the door behind him and observed the room.

The small room was dimly lit by a single light over the center of a round table. The man seated himself directly across from a dark figure.

When the dark figure spoke, his scratchy voice made the hairs on the man’s neck stand on end; “The brightest gem may be mined in the strangest of places.”

“As can people,” was the wet man’s reply.

For a moment, the dark figure said nothing, just staring the man down, interpreting the code they had just relayed. Finally, he said, “So Louis; do you have the box?”

“Right here.” Louis lifted the heavy travel case up onto the table. “I wouldn’t have come if I didn’t have it.”

“That is true, Louis. Now, how was your journey from the United States to here in little old Adria?”

“After getting the box, I stowed away onto a cargo ship here. On the ship was boxes of dead fish, Vincent. Dead fish. I was freezing and retching. Anyway, after at least two days without food or water, the ship arrived in Germany. I got food, ate and took a train to Italy. The ride was a few hours long, but it was fast. I got off the train, scanned the crowd for anyone suspicious, and took the cab you set up. I got out in Villadose and walked all the way here in the poring rain.”

“I admit Louis, you got guts. Coming all the way here… doing this for me. That hits me right here.” He pointed a ringed finger at his chest. “Of course, I hired you for that specific reason, but it takes a real man to accept this task.”

“Your friend held a gun to my head,” Louis said harshly. “I had no choice but to accept.”

“Yes, and it takes real wits to make such a snappy decision at gunpoint; when your life is in danger. I respect that,” Vincent said.

“So what’s so important that’s in this box or suitcase or whatever?” Louis asked, folding his hands atop the table.

“Well, I normally wouldn’t tell someone, but because you’ve gained my trust, I will tell you.” He reached for the suitcase and opened it up. “Young Louis, have you ever heard of the Mafia?”

“No, Vincent.”

“Well, your safely rich country full of unorganized crime is about to find out. In this travel case is the plans to our organized crime spree. A few years ago, the Mafia was formed in our sister region, Sicily. Since then, underground recruits have been made throughout Italy,” Vincent explained. “In a month, America will come to a rude awakening, young Louis.”

“You can’t do this,” Louis said immediately, standing from his chair. “I won’t let you!”

“Oh, but dear boy…” Vincent gave a toothy smile. “You already have.”

Two big men appeared out of the dark and grabbed Louis. Of course, the natural reaction was to resist, but the men were too strong. Louis trashed, but the men’s iron grip was too much, and he eventually became worn out.

“Take him to the isolated room so he can… think about this. Make sure he gets plenty of food, and let him walk around the room. He is no threat to us.”

The two men nodded and hauled Louis off, out of the room and down the hall. They stopped at a door, opened it, and threw Louis in. There was a loud slam, and it was completely dark.

The more and more that Louis thought about it, the more and more he felt bad. He could have stopped this, and sacrificed his life for the safety of America. He shook his head and thought, No, even if they had shot me, they would’ve just found someone else. It wouldn’t have made a difference.

Louis started to feel his eyelids droop. It was so dark, he wasn’t sure if his eyes were opened or closed. Surely, he could have fallen asleep with his eyes open right then and there.

There’s no use worrying, he thought. Besides, I’m tired and need rest. I just hope that they don’t try to poison my food in the morning… whenever that will be. Wonder if I’ll be able to tell…

Those were his last thoughts, for he feel asleep right in the dark room, on the cold, hard floor.

September 19, 2007

MYP Project

Filed under: MYP Project — one21 @ 12:35 pm

Project Overview: Basically, I’m doing a project with Mr. Mayo, and we are going to try and publish my book.

Goals: First, I’d like to finish my book, do a story/organization edit, then gramar edit. From there, we’ll publish it on Lulu.com, then try to sell it to a bigger publishing company.

Need to Accomplish: Right now, I’m mostly focused on just finishing the story, while Mr. Mayo finishes reading what I already have.

September 16, 2007

Free Write Uno

Filed under: Uncategorized — one21 @ 11:14 am

Mr. Mayo played this weird music, and my mind wandered. This is what I wrote:

I don’t know what to write . Where is Mr. Mayo getting this music? It’s disturbing. Creepy. Violent. Mysterious. Strang. Frightening. Mentally disturbing. The Holocaust. Germans! Tokio Hotel! Ubers ende der welt! Schrei! Tower. Clock. To late. Out of time. What the meow meow? Can’t think. Trapped. Alone. Scared. Lord of the Rings. Eragon. Yellow Submarine. Sea of Green. Beatles. Nowhere Man. Backwards. Forwards. Forwards. Up. Down. Time. Sands of Time. Shifting. Scary. Afraid. Chemicals. Horror. Thank goodness it’s over. 1 more minute. Beat. Black. Cloak. Brass. Leather. Greenday. Cold. Free. Live. Change. Scream. Young. Flight. Wings. Joy. No boundaries. Run. Fly. Go. Charlie the unicorn. Kidney. Dinosaur. Great escape. Forget. Fire. Ashes. Ember. Glowing. Radiance. Burning. Heat. Crisp air. Snow. Fear. Cold. Premonition. Changing. Shifting once more. Saving. Fang, Max, Angel, Nudge, Iggy, Total. Maximum Ride. The Angel Experiment. School’s out forever. Saving the world and other extreme sports. The final warning.

I was personally interested where my thoughts led me. First, I was listing words of what the music reminded me of, then I started to shut out the music and think differently. I listed stuff like “free”, “fly”, etc. That’s because I was listening to different music on the radio, and it reminded me of different things. I pulled some words from the lyrics, and some words are related to things that I write about in my stories and such. That thing about Charlie the Unicorn… that’s because I randomly glanced around my desk and pulled that form a small comic that I drew. After I wrote “Max, Fang…..” wrote the titles of the Maximum Ride books in order. I’ve found two different titles for the last book listed: Maximum Ride: The Last Global Warning Warning or Maximum Ride: The Final Warning. I don’t care what it’s titled, I just can’t wait for March 18th, 2008, because that’s the release date. I know where I’ll be that day—the book store. Just saying.

September 14, 2007

Book Mania

Filed under: Uncategorized — one21 @ 6:13 am

No, not really. That is never possible. Remember:

  1.  Do NOT change the password or email.
  2. Do NOT use your name or give out ANY personal contact information.

 Anway, I checked a book out of the library today: “Pendragon: The Merchant of Death” by D.J. MacHale. The description on the back of the book says, “Bobby Pendragon is a seemingly normal fourteen-year-old. He has a family, a home, and even Marley, his beloved dog. But there is something very special about Bobby. He is going to save the world. And not just Earth as we know it. Bobby is slowly starting to realize that life in the comsos isn’t quite what he thought it was. And before he can oject, he is swept off to an alternate dimension know as Denduron, a territory inhabited by strange beings, ruled by a magical tyrant…” and there’s more, I just don’t feel like typing the rest. You want to read the rest, go get the book yourself.

I picked this book because a friend gave it to me a few years ago. I just let it sit around, until I recently picked it up and started reading. Now I have A Pendragon book at my house and at school, so I won’t have to carry it back and forth time and time again. Bye now.

September 7, 2007

Internet Rules

Filed under: Uncategorized — one21 @ 5:49 am

Boring as it may be, it’s manditory that this is posted.

Rules:

  1. Don’t give out any personal information.
  2. Never Plagiarize. Always use your own words. Besides, it’s illegal.
  3. Use appropiate style of writing. IM chat is taking over our generation.
  4. Do not change your weblog’s e-mail, username, or password.
  5. Blog responsibly. If you don’t know how to, read these rules over.
  6. If you break any of the rules you will lose your weblog for the year. Let us not take this for granted.

My opinion on this: These rules are just meant to keep us safe and stuff. Not to ruin our fun. We have other websites for that. This site is educational purposes only. That’s all I can think of for now.

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